谁帮忙想个主意啊！

我哭，最近老师老说我写的essay和paper构架有问题，语句复杂化，描述不简洁，用词不够准确……我汗啊，竟然被说得一文不值了……哪位帮忙教教我啊。

每个学校都应该有专门的一个机构，帮助学生们写essay什么的。无论是对native speaker还是international students.你可以去问一下你们学校有没有。

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This is an excellent book about writing. I found many mistakes I made by reading this little book.

There is one chapter about composition, with lots of good points. Sorry I forgot the chapter number....

Not quite sure about your area. but this book is pretty good.

Turabian, Kate L
A manual for writers of term papers, theses, and dissertations
ISBN 226816265, 0226816273

thanks, everybody.