跟进。。。还有需要翻译的吗？

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-5-16 17:51:58编辑过]

对不起，赶紧改了，忙中出错

On this land we must build a community that's safer, more beautiful, and more caring for every individual. Because under the ground there were so many so many eyes that were pure, innocent, and hopeful.

我觉得我没有把“曾经” 的感觉翻译出来，只是用了were。。。

艾米的帖子里有总汇，更新一下就好。刚刚顶上来。。。

我的限额已经用完了。

个人建议。组织一起捐款的事情，保险一点比较好。家小这里很多Id都互相了解信任，闲话那里虽然信息交流快，可是人多也杂。我不建议在那里组织，因为要捐款必然要互相告知私人联络的方式。

我觉得倡议就好，关系好的MM们了解了情况可以私下组织，不要到网上来。

More than 600 children resumed their classes in Jiuzhou Stadium of Mianyang, with 600 sets of school supplies donated by OSCCF.

Currently the disaster relief effort has entered another crucial stage, focusing on preventing epidemic outbreaks. OSCCF rushed out some education materials and sent volunteers to victims' residential areas to promote the knowledge, as well as to distribute disinfection supplies. Meanwhile OSCCF use their established channel to keep sending masks, gloves and other protective products to the soldiers who are rescuing in the front line.

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-5-23 10:37:25编辑过]

Now the relief effort has entered another stage that's focused on preventing epidemic outbreaks, and helping quake victims to settle down. Chen Xiaowei, the president of OSCCF said, we can use the rest of OSCCF earthquake donations to buy some basics such as rice, flour, and oil and distribute to the people.  According to our volunteers in Guangyuan and Qiangchuan areas, many quake victims had suffered from starvation for many days due to lack of food.

This disaster is so devastating which will certainly have long-term impact to many areas. It means our relief work needs to be planed for long-term as well. Chen suggested, it will take some time for the corporations' gift matching funds to come into OSCCF's account. So this part of donation can be used for the post-disaster reconstruction. She said, I hope with OSCCF's effort, we can at least build a school that can sustain earthquakes.

1. Aim to help the rural elementary schools that had been destroyed in the 5.12 earthquake. One school should be able to enroll at least 270 students.


2. Fund allocation plan:

The budget to build an earthquake-proof elementary school is $80,000. OSCCF can do the following arrangement based on how much is left:

1. With $35,000, we can construct school's infrastructure such as buildings.


2. With $20,000, we can purchase some basic supplies such as desks, chairs, and blackboards, .etc.


3. With $15,000, we can purchase electronics including 20 computers, 1 printer, 1 scanner, 1 copy machine and some educational VCDs


4. With $10,000, we can purchase 4000 books, including text books, art, literature, popular science and some reference books.

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-5-23 10:37:47编辑过]

epidemic 应该指的是“瘟疫”，

communicable disease 泛指所有会传染的疾病，所以范围从AIDS到感冒都有。

这里是用epidemic更合适，皮蛋妈